[ Whoa. Did Stiles just see that? His eyes almost looked red for a second there. But he doesn't get time to ponder that, because his world is upending - ] Oh my god--
[ And just as quick as he'd gotten free, Stiles is pinned again, back in the dirt. His eyes shut when he makes contact, and the moment he flutters them open, Derek is right there again, in his space, so ridiculously close it makes his cheeks flush. He's not going to resist saying anything, either, because he's Stiles, and he manages to choke out. ]
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[ And just as quick as he'd gotten free, Stiles is pinned again, back in the dirt. His eyes shut when he makes contact, and the moment he flutters them open, Derek is right there again, in his space, so ridiculously close it makes his cheeks flush. He's not going to resist saying anything, either, because he's Stiles, and he manages to choke out. ]
Is this supposed to be "showing, not telling?"